1. no / unclear thesis statement
2. no/unclear topic sentences? - where's your PEER
3. not taking a clear stand?
4. no well balanced discussion
5. not applying 5W1H strategy and hence very limited discussion
-why and how
-causes and effects
6. lack of perspectives
Haha. (: We've found an efficient way to not copy notes in GP lessons yet stil bel able to get them :D
Labels: PY here
unleash the monster in you,
4:08 PM
