AQ for comprehension
Introduction
Opening line: Both passages discuss the various aspects of C.S. In my opinion, I believe ......... are indeed observed. This is because cosmetic products are getting more and more popular/ more people are going for beauty products in Singapore.
Body: Have well-balanced discussion
(I) 70% - your stand
30% - opposite stand
(II) 70% - agree with A and disagree with B
30% - Are B's points also valid? Are A's points also invalid?
Conclusion
Reiterate your stand. Do not merely restate what you have written before in the introductory paragraph.
4 steps in a paragraph
1. Refer to author's point.. by paragraph
2. Take a stand.
3. Evaluate.
4. Specific examples
Specific examples that can be used:
Andrea De Cruz - Slim 10
Imedeen (endorsed be Zoe Tay)
Botox
Regarding fusion of eastern and western perceptions of beauty: Kate Moss for Topshop clothing lines in Singapore.
Personal experience: Examples of Bulimia and Anorexia among friends, etc.
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